UFS 211 Unit 10 : Academic Writing ( TASK 10 )

"The Legendary Of Orang Minyak"

The legendary of orang Minyak is the folklore story which is happen at Tambunan village, this thing was happen when Gary the villager bring her college friend Ilu and Lulu to the village. Without they mansion, they already broke the rules which is Ilu and Lulu have period on that time while they at the village. Because of that, Ilu and Lulu is still virgin being disturb by Orang Minyak until their been rape by Orang Minyak.

UFS 211 Unit 9 : Academic Writing ( TASK 9 )

There are a few ways in which the lie detector can be used. Firstly, this machine can be used without a subject's knowledge has been introduced in Britain. The Dektor psychological stress analyzer (PSE) is used by private industry for pre-employment screening,investigating thefts, and even periodic staff checks. Besides, in the US,the device is used for pre-employment interviews with questions such as 'Have you used marihuana? and for monthly checks with branch managers, asking questions like 'Do you suspect any present employees of cheating the company? that is prevent a manager from setting his own pace to investigate possibly suspicious behavior. Moreover, it also can be used to probe a whole range of personal issues totally unrelated to job , and then the PSE can be used without the subject even knowing, its inventors analysed the televised Watergate hearings and told the press who they thought was lying. Other than that, there are few objections found in this machine. Finally, one of the other two units was being employed by a private firm for pre-employment checks. It also possible to pick out a word or phrase that caused stress. Lastly, its a primary application will be in situations where people may not object such as pre-employment interviews.

UFS 211 Unit 8 : Editing and revising (TASK 8 )

Don't ever let somebody tell you you can't do something. You got a dream, you gotta protect it. Moreover,if you want something, go get it. Period."

In Columbia Pictures' The Pursuit of Happiness, Chris Gardner (Will Smith) is a bright and talented but marginally employed salesman. Struggling to make ends meet, Gardner finds himself and his five-year-old son evicted from their San Francisco apartment with nowhere to go. When Gardner lands an internship at a prestigious stock brokerage firm, he and his son endure many hardships, including living in shelters, in pursuit of his dream of a better life for the two of them.

Besides,Chris Gardner (Will Smith) is a family man struggling to make ends meet. Despite his valiant attempts to help keep the family afloat, the mother (Thandie Newton) of his five-year-old son Christopher (Jaden Christopher Syre Smith) is buckling under the constant strain of financial pressure. No longer able to cope, she reluctantly decides to leave.

Chris, now a single father, continues doggedly to pursue a better-paying job using every sales skill he knows. He lands an internship at a prestigious stock brokerage firm, and although there is no salary, he accepts, hopeful he will end the program with a job and a promising future. Without a financial cushion, Chris and his son are soon evicted from their apartment and forced to sleep in shelters, bus stations, bathrooms, or wherever they can find refuge for the night.

Finally, despite his troubles, Chris continues to honor his commitment as a loving and caring father, using the affection and trust his son has placed in him as an impetus to overcome the obstacles he faces.

UFS 211 unit 7 : The narrative paragraph -1 (TASK 7 )

MY UNFORGETTABLE CHILDHOOD MEMORY

My first love moved to another country when we was primary. They told me it was just "puppy love" and I would soon forget about the person, but I never did. We communicated for two years after she migrated but lost communication due to heavier school load, family problems, and just growing up. I met new people that came into my life, and moved on. But I knew that that person would always be special to me. I missed him every day since the day we stopped communicating, so whenever I got the chance I tried to look for him on the internet.

A few more years went by and I discovered "The Secret," and there was a part there about communicating with old friends. So I thought long and hard how I could use that with the said person. Months later, during my birthday, he e-mailed me a long message saying happy birthday and asking how I have been for the past few years. That really shocked me, and that was the first proof that The Secret worked. 

I was overwhelmed by the happiness I felt when he started to communicate with me again, so I instantly replied to his letter, but unfortunately she wasn't able to reply for some months after that. Then I was ranting to my friend how s

he never replied to me after my birthday and how he didn't fulfill his promises of coming home last December. I thought of The Secret once again, and the next day to my surprise he tweeted me and said sorry he wasn't able to come home but he will try again in November 2011. Nothing is set in stone since they are pretty busy there, but from then on we started communicating again as friends and my faith in "The Secret" has never been this strong.

UFS 211 unit 6 : Mechanical/Grammer (TASK 6 )

My problem when I’m do is grammar, sometimes I don't know how to put the grammar, is it past tense or future tense. I always weak in grammar that is why sometimes I get a poor result. Second, I always feel not confident with my grammar when I’m do writing because if I do a grammar mistake it can give effect to my writing. In addition, always my problem when making my writing is often lacking in ideas and very slow when describing the contents of this important. , I can't get the good idea to my writing and always spend a long time to think my good idea also I always give the same idea to my writing; I can't think more idea again. In my opinion way to improve my writing skills is practice and always does a revision every day, only this way can make me easy to do a good writing in English. Besides, I need to work hard to read and look for additional knowledge through the Internet, dictionaries, or books and newspapers, but not least a good way to increase the use of English language by read at the newspaper or radio and I need to be sensitive to those around who communicate with me using English because in this way, it can accelerate and facilitate the making of writing myself.

UFS 211 Unit 5 : Writing a paragraph 1 (TASK 5 )

Water pollution is an undesirable change in the state of water, contaminated with harmful substances. It is the second most important environmental issue next to air pollution. Any change in the physical, chemical and biological properties of water that has a harmful effect on living things is water pollution. It affects all the major water bodies of the world such as lakes, rivers, oceans and groundwater.

Pollution of the water bodies disturbs the ecosystem as a whole. Polluted water is not only unsafe for drinking and other consumption purposes, but it is also unsuitable for agricultural and industrial uses. The effects of water pollution are detrimental to human beings, plants, animals, fish and birds. Polluted water also contains virus, bacteria, intestinal parasites and other pathogenic microorganisms. Using it for drinking purpose is the prime cause for waterborne diseases such as diarrhea, dysentery and typhoid.

UFS 211 Unit 4: Introduction of a paragraph ( TASK 4)

Writing is an essential part of college life. Every student, from freshman to graduate, needs to develop good writing habits in order to succeed in life. Writing is essential to success even if one chooses not to attend college; it is essential in everyday life. For many people, writing is an evil task that teachers require, however there is a solution: the writing process. The writing process is a technique that includes: brainstorming, outlining, drafting, revision and editing. Follow those five easy tasks to get a paper started and finished successfully. Brainstorming is the first step in the writing process. Defined as “tossing out ideas,” brainstorming is the best way to get your creative juices flowing. Brainstorming can be done in many forms including: free writing, looping, clustering, collaborating, and simply asking questions. Free writing is the least complicated of the five. It consists of writing consistently for a period of time. This technique allows one to write whatever comes to mind without the worry of grammar, spelling, or punctuation. Often the best ideas are presented in free writing techniques. Looping is a direct form of free writing. Rather than spending an extended period 

UFS 211 Unit 3 : Process Writing (TASK 3)

Writing process is a very important to learn, especially for students. The writing process is like a mirrors the way proficient writers write. In stages of writing process , there's five stages. Firstly, prewritng, typically followed by drafting, revision and publishing. The element of prewritng may include planning, research, outlining, diagramming, stroryboarding, or clustering. In fact, prewritng is how we decide on a topic to write about and consider who will read or listen to our written work. Next, is drafting which have students independently at this stage. In this stages, we put the information that have been researched into your own words, and writers sentences and paragraphs even if they are not perfect, and also read what we have written and judge if it said the meaning. In the third stages, is revising, which show students how to revise specific aspects of their writing to make it more coherent and clear during mini lessons. The revising also is to make it better, means we should think what others said about it, and rearrange words sentences, while replaced overused or unclear words, then read it back to be sure it flows smoothly. The next stages is editing, that we can call as a proofreading, which is the purpose of it, is to make it correct. The way is, be sure all sentences are complete, with a correct spelling, capitalization and punctuation then recopy it correctly and neatly. The final step of the writing process is publishing, which encourage students to publish their works in variety of ways. It's need to produce a final copy of each work, in the correct format. The exact meaning of this step is share the finished writing to others. It involves the stages of development, copy editing and production. So, from now onward, we must know how to follow the process of writing to simply us to create your writing greatly.

UFS 211 UNIT 2 :Sentences Structure (TASK 2)

                                                       
SIMPLE SENTENCE:

1. Juan and Alicia play basketball every afternoon.
2. Some student like to study in the evening.
3.Desmond goes to the library and studies everyday.

COMPOUND SENTENCE

1.I like chocolate ice cream, but my friend likes strawberry.
2. I am on a diet yet I really want to cookie.
3. My mother was working, so I went shopping.

COMPLEX SENTENCE

1. When he handed his homework, he forgot to give the teacher the last page.
2.My friend invited me to a party, but I do not want to go.
3. Because the soup was too cold,  I warmed it in the microwave.

COMPOUND-COMPLEX SENTENCE

1.Although I enjoy shopping, I haven't been to  the mall in two weeks, and i am broke!
2. I want to play in the snow, but unless I can find my gloves, I can't.
3. If I earn money from my chores, I will buy a new purse, but I don't get my allowance today.

UFS 211 UNIT 1: Pre-Writing (TASK 1)

                                                     

What is love? It is one of the most difficult questions for the mankind. Centuries have passed by, relationships have bloomed and so has love. But no one can give the proper definition of love. To some Love is friendship set on fire for others Maybe love is like luck. You have to go all the way to find it. No matter how you define it or feel it, love is the eternal truth in the history of mankind.  

Love is patient, love is kind. It has no envy, nor it boasts itself and it is never proud. It rejoices over the evil and is the truth seeker. Love protects; preserves and hopes for the positive aspect of life. Always stand steadfast in love, not fall into it. It is like the dream of your matter of affection coming true. Love can occur between two or more individuals. It bonds them and connects them in a unified link of trust, intimacy and interdependence. It enhances the relationship and comforts the soul. Love should be experienced and not just felt. The depth of love cannot be measured. Look at the relationship between a mother and a child. The mother loves the child unconditionally and it can not be measured at all.   A different dimension can be attained between any relationships with the magic of love. Love can be created. You just need to focus on the goodness of the other person. If this can be done easily, then you can also love easily. And remember we all have some positive aspect in us, no matter how bad our deeds maybe. And as God said Love all.